You are such a good writer. You don't do the typical rhyme thing everytime when you write. All your stuff is different so I always look forward to reading what you come up with.
This was really good. These little writings you come up with pack a lot of punch in them

I don't really know what to say about this. I haven't read one like this before. You always come up with a topic no one else writes about or take one everyone has already written and do it so much better. That's really all I can say about this.
"Don't let me walk with him
It's you I want to walk with
Don't let me talk of him
It's you I want to talk with
Dont let me fall for him
It's you I want to fall in love with"
That's my favorite part right there.