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There'll never be another me
Promises broken, chances blown
Bitter tears and feelings thrown
Phony smiles and broken hearts,
Something's tearing us apart
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the feeling of these mighty words just hit me straight to the face...
that opening line "there'll never be another me" is damn good cuz of the fact that its extremely true...its you from the start til the end
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I can't leave, but I can't stay
And I can't believe these games we play
What is it that we did wrong?
Because all the happiness is gone
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questions that would always be asked whenever things are getting mess up...the contradictory of the line "i cant stay , but i cant leave" held this part strong enough to even stand out in the whole poem..props
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Before you turn to walk away,
And say those things I know you'll say
Take one good look at what you see
There'll never be another me
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damn!...i read that out loud and just how i said it made me weak and sad....cuz those moments ya know like when ur about to leave and while ur walking away ur scared to turned around cuz ur heart might tell ur feet to go back...."there'll never be another me"..thats always been a good line..my fave...nice!
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Quiet stares and empty words
A cry for love that goes unheard
Painful silence, angry eyes
Emotions that can't be disguised
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like i said...that moment when its just you and her .... the feeling just mixed up with anger and happiness that would all sum up to pain....
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The laughs and smiles have disappeared
There's no doubt something's missing here
Things are changing, by and by
In ways we can't ask how or why
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the pain, arrgh!...i liked this!
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Confusion's hitting more and more
What exactly are we looking for?
Before you leave and don't come back,
Before you run to where someone else is at
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this sums it up...all those thoughts for just one question for you to find the answer to...much emotion
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Take one good look at what you see
because there'll never be another me
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finally...the ending...*sigh* just sooo emotional.....ahhhhhhh my fave line " There'll never be another me"
over all nice man....its funny cuz i mostly have critism to much of the poems here ..hehehe u got lucky im in a cheesy mood...nahhh..nice poem