I just got done saying this in the last response but here goes again. You either come up with something completely new or write about something old so much better than everyone else has.

This one was very sad. It was short with a lot of info and emotion in it. I liked it a lot.

"*and through his mind*
*the memories ran*
*of the moments they walked*
*and ran in the sand hand and hand*
*but now her eyes were so terrible cold*
*for he would never again*
*have her to hold*
*they watched in silence*
*as he bent near*
*and whispered the words..*
*"I LOVE YOU" in her ear* "

That was the part I liked a lot. It was sad. Nice job.