I liked this, very indepth meaning and great imagery, flow started off great then gradually faded but not too much though.

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and whatever his life was worth has been cashed in,
for a faction of distractions even people landing on him
standing on his last whim poking flags in his skin,
his future's reaper, damn it is grim, he still stands tall
after all he deals with, the faces of evil, envy and hatred,
the difficulty of being the brightest thing in the darkest of places,

^ Nicely done Creation, flowed pretty nice, lol @ the flag poking skin line.

Not the best ive seen from you, but it was pretty good none the less - reply to the piece ive got up in a bit hombre. .