Flow was off from the get-go, multi's seemed forced to me ' gonna post' 'wuz a joke' you need to elevate those man, get some real multi syllable use. Work on your flow a bit, the uneven bars sacrificed the flow, made it seem elementary rhyming to me, you could of therown more punches or added some wordplay to hold the readers attention a little more, but you'll learn more about that as you elevate i guess.

Peace!

Oh, and reply to my drop "Tell A Vision" lol. .