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*door opens and you hear footsteps faintly then louder*
*a door screechs open then you hear the church organ*
*mischief is in a confessional*

father i'm askin for forgiveness, for i don't know what ta do//
my bitch start fuckin around and i confronted her and she sed it's was through//
i swear all i want ta do, is fucking bitch her out and take her life//
how and tha hell could me and this woman ever consider becomin man and wife//
i went through all this strife, sacrifices, and abunch shit//
and all that was goin through her head was how she wanted to quit//
i can't believe i actually fell in love wit a semen suckin fuckin ho//
i guess this is just some shit that all of us men will never know//
how a woman can posess a man, it's so fuckin evil//
i could never amagine my ass watchin her walk down that isle, in that church wit da steeple//
she needs ta change tha way she treats ppl, or she end up lonely and old//
all because she was so fuckin wrong and a heart that was always cold//
she had secrets she shoulda told, but she didn't so we'll never b together//
i guess to find real love u gotta go through all tha bad weather//

*thunder and rain in background*

i'm back father, now i know i was just here but i'm back again//
i gotta get this off my chest and confess that i just shot and killed a man//
heard he was tha one that was gettin wit my girl fuckin me over, and i saw him//
so i looked into his eyes and saw death so i pulled out my 9 witout any stallin//
like alicia keys he was fallin, after he droped i started kickin him and cussin up a storm//
jumped his ass out on his own block didn't tell neone of his boyz so there was no warn//
had no remorse left tha fuckin corpse out in tha middle of his street//
tha only marks it had was a couple of sratches gun wound and tha bruises from my feet//
tommorrow he'll be buried 6' feet deep, but thats another sin that's been committed//
i might make a drive by tommorrow to his boys, well if tha weathers permitted//

*police sierens and thunder in background*

father i guess this is strike three for me, i have rly fucked up//
remember me comin in a couple dayz ago and confessin about that guy i shot up//
well turns out some how tha cops found out it was me so now i'm on tha run//
damn, father help me, now how am i gonna try and explain this to my son//
if they find me, it's an automatic jail sentence i think 25 to life//
now how i'm gonna get a mother for my child and for me a wife//
i shoulda thought twice but that fuckin bitch got into my head//
but i still don't feel bad for tryin ta kill that bitch and for that ass that was dead//
tha writin was on that wall i shoulda read, but i guess i just gotta keep movin on//
i swear if i find out who told on me, when i see em i'mma explode on them like a bomb//
but for my safety i gotta stay calm, but wait aminute wasn't u an old cop father//
ya that's right u were, i remember now kuz i use ta date ur daughter//
it was u wasn't it, i trusted u, how could u just go ahead and fuck me over//
bout that time i pulled out my 9 and shot him just below tha left shoulder//

*thunder and rain in background as Biblakul breathes heavily*