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Old 06-10-03, 01:23 AM   #24
DIZZY D
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Weaponz- Weapon's got more 'DEF JAMS' than the hearing impaired on busy-streets //
I'ma replace ya vital organs with a TURNIP so ya heart don't miss-a-BEAT //

Ill, love that turnip n beat part

I'm untouchable, like using a STICK-for-BEATING-my-SOUND //
It's was a simple UNDERTAKING to put this bitch-six-feet-in-da-ground //

Nice wordplay weak punch tho

Nobody wants BEEF with me like vegetarians GETTING SERVED red-meat //
Ya audio rhythm is a BASTARD like the father you never knew... a DEAD-'BEAT' //

Haha ill multi's n meta's cuz, you mixed them words up real nice, overall, a 6.7/10

Statement- they call me 'crazy legs' because I'm breaking your 'feemas'/
you're only nuke weaponz cuz I blew you up like hiroshima/

Wtf is that lol

like Wolverine after the bell, under's here to 'mutant-late'/ (mutilate)
like going out with counting sheep, your rhymes just se-"date"/

umm dont like how you changed mutant late to mutilate and tha second part didnt make no sense your tryin to hard

calling you 'dear'(deer) like grandmas, cuz I'm about to run you down/
merking this 'psycho in a mask'(mm), giving Nuke loses from 'Ltown'/

Ok wordplay but no punch overall 4.3/10

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