Thread: Weaponz vs Sand
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Old 06-10-03, 02:08 AM   #30
DIZZY D
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Sand- Swoop You down as you swoosh your gown who's the frown?
we know who's the winner...you reppin "L"oser Town!

Nice personals and wordplay

yes im stoopin down to the level of ground. hey wait i see ya.
You Lethal? Dont Believe Ya. Havent Been Used Since Hiroshima!
Greas'a ...fuck this battle........ryan is coming....FUCK MAN

dont know tha purpose of that last line but good wordplay on tha other two not too hard of a punch tho overall verse 4.7/10

Weaponz- Your "OVER'CAST" Like Fishing In Prison Puddles During Bad Weather You'll Never Be In Exact CON-tact/
You'll Never Be 'SUSPENSEFUL' Like Broadway Plays "CUTTIN" A James Bond Act/

Nice punch, hard and clever

You Couldn't Bring-Tha-House-Down If You Had An Accident In A Shed Were You Store-Leaf-Blowers/
Your 'PUSHING'(hustling) Your Luck In This Battle Like Leprechauns "SELLING" Four-Leaf-Clovers/
Like From Last Family Reunion Your Gettin 'SERVED' Less Beef And More-'MEAT'LOAF-Leftovers/

Damn that PUSHIN luck line has to be tha cleverest shit i've ever read hard as fuck punch but bad wordplay, overall a 6.6/10
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