"only positive criticism", i dont know how get away with placin at on tha end of your post, lol, no hate.....mad props,

Tha piece was hott, it was deep......so it could throw sum kats off, flow was good, rhyme scheme could have been betta, i lyked it becuz it was full of emotion.........make those corrections and this ish will blow up,

stay real, peace, 1 luv

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