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Old 06-10-03, 11:03 PM   #10
DIZZY D
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From: Elmira NY
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Trife- This here will leave Scuffmarks Jesus type text the way I sun god
Never punched hard It’ll take more then a Jerkmioff to cum hard

Nice play on his name

Complaining about your records proves that You’re less of man
Only time Jerkmioff come tight is when he’s Raping his hands

Nice punch

I read your shit. Bazooka gum Text I knew you was a joke
Learn my quotes before I’ll make you the second one scared to post

Good wordplay but no punch

Trife’s one for thirst, Cause I swallow Mc’s like drunks in a Distillery
I murdered your Social studies and fucked up your entire history

Good multi

You did it to yourself in a literal sense, You can’t curb me whore..
Pedophile text. Must be a sex offender with a name like jerkmioff
I’m cookin this kid like rotisserie oven hickory smoking in broth
I pulled your card Milly vanilly flow; we all know you’re really a fraud

Good wordplay and nice punches

Son, I fathered you, So no apologies from this verse I abused
The only positive feedback you’ll ever get is from mics in sued

Dope

You should start thinking about other alternatives like chosen to quit
The only time you ever wreaked havoc was when I blew you to bits

Good wordplay weak punch, overall a 6.7/10

Jack- Before you lose your "train of thought" remember im on the "right track"
Trif got Lyrics? customers stopped comeing.. Cause he even bites wack

Lmao ill punch and multi

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*Imma Murder This Bitch*

Think we're on the same page... LMAO what book you reading?
Your creating too much waste... To keep both of us breathing

Good and complex punch

His structure- cheating, doing anything to influence placement
Judges beware.. 'do the Honours' to Triflin is a literal statement!!!

Nice punch and good wordplay

Now Spitya You's shook.. I came out of nowehere like Peek-a-Boo
Triflin Still couldn't ''shock'' me if you chose to use ''Pikachu''

Ok i guess wasnt really feelin

You're rap career's over..You can only reminisce the days of youth
Got you acting like Lincoln, Getting shot up in every booth

Lol nice

I'll wreck, destroy, and rip your bowels.. T will spare nothin
I got him throwing in the towel quicker then scared muslims

Lol hard but played

This dood been sucking too much dick.. Look his words are slured
I'm a heavey hitter with w's.. Like underfeated summo wrestlers

Dope line

believe its crunch time... and believe that you dont want to be brave
cause I'll give you a bruised ego to go along with your face

Nice closer, overall a 7/10
Vote=Jack
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