We aren't even going to begin to talk about my spelling of Toronto.

I can do better than that. Out of everything i have ever heard that is by far the worst. So everyone can do better than that.

Let me break down why it sucked. Please read this. It will make you better if just not 'less worse'.



First of all this chorus is atrocious. You make you're voice sound horrible. If this was played at a club, i would say it is very likely that everyone would leave. Its simple, yes, but it sounds, well it sounds like you have a german accent or some shit.

Moving on. Your verse. You have very poor emphasis on your words and you're flow is umm.. non-existent. It basically sounds like you're talking. You have like 5 words in a bar. That isn't right.

oh... god i can't even listen to this anymore.