Nice job on writing this. I liked the style of it. I haven't seen one like this before..

The content was really good. And the way you wrote it was good too..like with the bold letters.

"I .. I ... Lu-Lu-Lu..fuck it

I dont know if you feel this way too

I ... I ... Lu.. GOD DAMMIT

In my mind i hope and tell my self you do

I... .I ...I..cant commit..

But I do love you........"

I thought that was the best part. I laughed when I read it cause I did nearly the same thing and felt like an idiot not being able to get the words out. Good piece..