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Old 06-12-03, 02:52 AM   #15
Dez
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I Kick it off with sumthin fresh, and Then you'll see
That Im Omiting R and E just to F U Gee
Ya fuckin geek, peep his sig with repercussions
Hes about to cry cuz he got cut from a wack Production
And I Love it, This battle is for the belt, but Im not kiddin


^^^ill

And I Love it, This battle is for the belt, but Im not kiddin
When I say your leavin empty handed like folks who got caught shoplifting
I rock kiddies, everyone who read yur shit is pissed
Cuz its like you tried to catch on to a tight style......but missed

^^pretty good....not as ill as the first 2 bars but good...


Ya prick, I mean your gunna win! So why even bother...
HAHA sike! Sarcasm is just another service I offer
You come softer with Rhymes than Snuggles the Bear
So Im splitting your end like I was Rubbing a Nasty bitches hair

^^bah...i didnt like these 2 bars at all really...

Better Beware, Ive got a movie crew I think you could join
We'll call ya Peter Pans bestest friend, cuz its easy to see ya Lost Boy

^^great closer



now fgee...

Martinelli your pants are fallin down....cos i'm taking the belt
Look closely!.....it's not only his punches that are never felt

^^ill

U reset the form 10 times before sending.....just delayed wack shit
When i told him to do his spit......he coughed up phlegm the fuckin spastic
Marti tried to think of new ideas.....suffering in writers block
I told him to leave his hood.....but he wouldnt take stock

^^average....

An equation fo your verse equals......90 percent filler for every cliched punch on the page
The odds are against u (9-3) winning this batle.....i'm about to even you right up
Don't be embarassed and say u don't care....i know u give a fuck
Your punches are like poor bums......cos they never hit home
Like they lost their bearings....and now they're free to roam

^^good besides the last line...that was wack

Part of tha regime....but your verse was out of order
The + side is it was better than normal.....but it still managed to cross the wackness border

^^ok

Crook ed and martinelli....1 faggot and two names
at least ur hot now.....u just got shot down in flames

^^^ played

overall i think that it was a valiant effort Fgee....but Marti edged this one out

vote=Martinelli