I like the way you used your wordplay and your emotions..............

I pause, intake the images rendered at center stage/
with a cigarette, winter froze my heart so my hand,
shakes the heavens, question the quest of love, I cant/
complete, fuck the world inscribed upon my grave,

I like that part...........I could see exactly what you were saying and then I had to read the whole thing over again. Really nice work on this...............keep droppin'