The concept on this was pretty good, but you didn't really deliver the lyrical quality to make it a superior piece. The flow was all over the place, and you really lacked the multis...Seems you were stuck on 'one word a line' rhyme scheme. Like I said though, you picked a good topic to write on. Shit like that is going on all over the place, it's real shit. Overall, it wasn't bad, but still could of been better. Keep 'em coming....Pz!