Half of it didnt rhyme and the flow was horiible dont do this

blah//
blablahblahblah//
blahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblah//
blahblah/
blahblahblahblahblahblah//
blah//
blahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahblahbl ahblahblah//

It looks horrible and doesnt sound right