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Old 06-13-03, 06:07 PM   #2
Born2flow
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From: Brooklyn, New york city where they paint murals of biggie
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try to put ur words in structure....
instead of...
jhugfjhgjhwgjfgwjjrefhwgwlfjgwjgfjwjefshgfgsdjfgjs gfjgfjgfjgfgjegfergjferjgrjfegrfygjjfgjsgfjgfruewg fjegfiuyuygfriuryurfuyfguyfgtuktrudhtfrdutrugreufe tuyyydsydygdyguudehsetfrtsfgteewtwefetyfftdtyeehgg dghsdfhgfdfgshgfwfhfqdwffuck ur moms in the buttt blah

try like dis.....
blah blah blah blah cat//
blah blah blah blah blah mat//
blah blah blah blah blah blah blah rat//
blah blah blah blah bat//
blah blah blah blah blah sat//

its easier to read and you'll see improvement in rhyme scheme.
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