ay yo it's been a long ass time since i've written i'm just tryin to see if i still got it in me. so give me feedback


every mornin i get up and look in the mirror and all i see is the other me/
askin myself what i've become cus now no one wants to bother me/
do i even have true friends that i can have trust in and believe/
or will i support myself when my love ones around me start to leave/
i don't know if i have enough potential in my soul to maintain/
now you lookin at me like i'm insane ready to take the blame/
cus that's all i do when somebody gets in trouble/
damn i'm already diggin my own grave with a shovel/
cus nobody cares about my feelins inside my emotions i hide/
no one even cared or tried to comfort me when i cried/
so now i'm askin who will i rely on in my life/
will it be no one cus i'm not afraid to pick up this knife/
you don't have to tell me i already know i'ma reject/
damn why can't you accept, all i want is respect/
now ya not liking the other me, damn cus you didn't like the real me/
ya so complex can't make up ya mind it's so confusing/
i give up up i will never win this i'm already loosing/

plz give me advice or feedback so i can fix it cus i'm tryin to write a song cus this is the 1st verse.

peace