i liked this a lot, u know your one of the best textcees here so im not gonna give u all that shit but i have 1 critiscm, sumtimes it read 2 much like a poem, for example u meant 2 rhymes such as promise and conciouse which wouldnt really work and would look out of place if u ever did this audioly but its till dope 2 fuck. also u are the first 2 be rated under the new Eborted RAting System!

Eborteds Verdict- A-