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Originally posted by Kapone
the lines were good , good topic
however i wasent feelin the way the scheeme flip flopped
it was line 2,3,2,4,3,,2,4,2,3 i like it when the lines r even, but good stuf either way
addalso, i didnt like the way it was forced at times,
str8 drop, and please peep my new open mic "please dont sleep, i put alotta nuthin in this one"
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^^^I never really Stick to a Straight Scheme, I don't think its necessary, Fuck that...Its definitely Structured well enough in my view...And It was Forced??? What are you talkin bout Mun??? haha....Uppin....
........Pz........
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