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Old 06-15-03, 03:37 PM   #7
RythmicTendicies
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"i stand alone, with a million and one followers
we patrol stealthilly to the depths of my balck sould.and onwards"

this was a nice way to start this piece off, the flow not only in these 2 lines but the full verse was hot...

"sometimes a trip but i darent fall flat
for i kno if a fall they will not hesitate to stab me in my back
i am more afraid of my aillies than my own worst enemy
but in times of need like this one. they always come thru for me
this bttle with no warzone and no end is draining
and for some strange reason on the back of my neck i feel deaths grasp is gaining"

this to me is the best stanza, the flow and meaning to this was grade A...it made me really think about the piece as a whole..

keep droppin them like this dawg!
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