k i wasnt feeling yo 1st verse seems like wheneva u got a good rhyme, yo bars were 2 short or u couldnt back it up with the flow, nothing wrong with your actual lyrics, u made up 4 it sublimely tho in teh 2nd verse yo 1st 2 lines i was really feelin

vocab aight, wordplay more, subject matter- good

Eborted verdict- B