yo man u gotta always practice 24-7 man if u wanna get better....
Ure flowin like a dried up river, u got no wordplay , no multis or nothin.... and u goota spit with more presence and energy on the mic...cuz if u dont sound like u init, the listener for sure wont be in it........ but yo take it as a critique not as a diss... everyone gotta start somewhere