i dont really know what to say...read it twice, sometimes i take a minute to catch on~ "Could never look down, cause I was at the bottom" that fragment was my favorite, it jus kinda blatently shows a state of mind....maybe im ramblin, but hey, it makes sense to me- the poem seemed a lil unfinished, but then again, that may be the effect u wanted. So all in all, it was cool to me~