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Old 06-16-03, 01:44 PM   #2
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It was alright. I didnt like the hook at all, it flowed horrible, sounded sorta like a short talking verse, didnt like it. The verses were aight. You rhymed words that shouldn't have been rhymes like domination and termination - those words dont rhyme, jus because the ation part does. I think it could have been wrote better, just my honest opinion. keep em comin tho, elevate.
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