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Old 06-16-03, 08:24 PM   #24
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cyris, your verses need to elevate bro, you need to make them longer and more complicated. Yourz was very basic, and I didn't like it.
Sandman came hard but I know you have more potential than that in you. I have seen some better rhymes from sandman before and was a little disappointed but overall he was much better than trash, I mean cyris.
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