Thread
:
Those who Diss Me
View Single Post
06-17-03, 02:18 PM
#
3
Horus Sky
Guest
Posts: n/a
IP:
hmm, i duno bout this one dunn...
some lines came off weak...
i dont think you need to emphasize key words to get wordplay and similies..they are pretty obvious unless most ya readers are morons....
Horus Sky