ok Cin, Ive never ead any of your shit, but here goes my analyis:

1. This is a good AUDIO piece, but not a good open mic...in open mic if you write audio shit it just sounds like your saying random shit to make i rhyme (Which is what audio is.) In open mic peeps like shit with feeling or deep thought behind it...this would be a nice piece for audio, not for open mic...but if ya put it to the beat from "X" by Xzibit, it sounds tight as fuck.

~1~ A2Z