Yo guy it aint even about your mixin mayne...u mumblin and whisperin guy... another man that reminds me of blair witch project ...cmon man u gotta put energy into it, mic presence/
Plus ure rhymes are pretty simple..take time writin ure shit and u gotta at least try to flow decently... but yo dont take this as a diss. im juss givin u something to start workin on.. keep writin and rappin and recordin everyday... where did u get this beat