A powerful piece. One that was long, yet kept the reader glued to it.

Structured it fairly well. Thought once or twice it tailed off a BIT, not a lot, but a bit. Also a bit bumpy in way the emotions flowed once or twice. But not really anything to 'write home about' (whatever relevance that has to art/poetry or whateveri dunt know,.but you get the point...)...

...very nice...very nice..

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