It was really good. You're getting better. I liked what you wrote about, how you wrote it, and how well it put an image into my head. It was a good read.

have I done somethin to deserve this seclusion,
or are my "friends" unwilling to uphold their title,
should I have to travel everytime I want to hang out,
or should it be equal and both parties reach out,

Those were the lines I liked the most. Keep posting more..