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its a shame when ya act hard and come wit da hard knock approach
but ruth gets turn'd down by pussy now you fuckin cocaroach(see avy)
last time you talked to a bitch online she called ya fat and ugly
last time i talked to bitch online ........you tried to cyber fuck me
he's all over saladins nutts makin sure there nicly clean'd & pollished.....but
rember i brought hot-dogs from ya pops so he could put ya ass in collage
right first two lines were ok, but a bit weak, lacked a much needed opening punch. Second two lines i could see where your coming from, saying hes the bitch but i mean, your wordchoice was very poor, and the punch im taking it a lot of people didnt get. last two there were extremely poor man.. seriously no beef, but not one decent punch there, and basic vocab aswell..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=37236
^^^yeah now i know ya crazed, thinkin he'll hurt me in combat
well atleast not lookin like jaleal white rockin burgandy contact's
damn bucko wit pics like this you could really blow the game
''is he standin like that on purpose?'' no ruth is the hunchback of notredame
first two here were better, not great, but better. Nice personal in the end of this bit, refering to the attached picture, i dont think many people noticed it thought to be honest man..
''ruth must be a gang member throwin up gang signs like that''
...naw thats just the number of times hes been fucked in the ass
his eyes are blood shot not from weed, he's a shameless shit
his eye's need help, too bad they dont make visene for cocaine addicts
first two here... again quite poor, played punchline. These ending 2, were just, elementary dawg, seriously again, no beef but it was just, very poor...
Now ruthless's verse
Listen Up X Faggot,Theres No Way You Could Hold-Me, Talk Shit And Im Spraying More Mace Than The "Police" /
Fall Back Clench Your Life faggot ,I Got Big Trucks, Tha Only Wheels That This fool Push Is On A "Trolley" /..lol
When Im Done Ripping You,Ya Really Gonna Hope-U-Dead,Talk Shit like a bia bia And i'LL Leave U "Sliced" Up Like A "Loaf-Of-Bread" /
20-4 battle Record??..lol One Hit Have You In The Hospital Dosed-On-Meds, I Aint Talking Bout "Champaine Glasses" When I Say The Burner Will "Toast"-Ya-Head" /
Right this is more like the opening you needed X, its got punches, nice wordplay, vocab, creativity....
I Got TiMe-To-Do, Because Of Nines-And-Tools, Look Out I Got "Doublemint" Shot Guns To Put Your Spine-In-"Two" /
Spittin Verbally Punch Lines-In-You, Dumb Nigga Cant Define "Farewell" But He Says He Gonna Drive-"BYE"-And-Shoot? /
U Ride On My Block,But Scared To Hop-Out,He Wasnt "Sober",Thrown Out "Classroom Windows" So He Think He A "Highschool Drop-Out" /
Yeah You Talk Alot And You Can Pop-Loud, But My Guns Like "Doctor Talk On A Blasted Radio" Cuz All My "Shots"-Loud /
I Got Bullets That Will Turn Your Jaw, Cuz I Stay "Bustin With MAGNUMS" Kinda Like "Porno Stars" /
Bullets Hit Ya Back And Leave Ur Spine-Burried, If My Rhymes Were "Published",U'd Have More "Copies" Than The "Library" /
Very nice multis in this, lots of punches, creativity again, and personals...... came strong, and was consistant in being strong.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...hlight=xsignals(X Kid GOt Fucked By Chrit..lol)
let me finish this nigga
Yall Minnie Mie's(MM) bitches Waitin for More ?! ....then I'll rip X Without any Signal Heart out his Chest n Freestyle to the Beat that it Makes on the Floor....Ruth just anotha Crazed Prick 'Sick' wit Infections who Sprays Shit with intentions to create a shift that leaves ya Face Split--Slice wit the Blade Quick n penetrate straight thru ya Brace-let till ya Veins Slit - next time battle me witta "First Aid Kit"
Very sweet ending, i think you could have just used this and beat X in this case....... Had multis, nice personal, punches, the lot, overall tight
basically this battle, was one sided, X you might have won if you replaced some of your more basic lines with more thought out lines with multis and punches etc...... so this ones going to Ruth
Hit up these battles being slept on:
BlacK_PlaGuE -vS- Fo' Real
BlacK_PlaGuE -vS- ThugzDoCry
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