Light Weight
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IP:
Well Kapone, I'm the freeposter here at RB and I decided to make your thread my next victim since it looks so lonely.
I've read this a few times and didn't know if I should respond since it's a touchy subject. I liked this, like most of the other stuff you've posted. You're a good writer and I usually read what you put up here.
When you write, you always do good at putting up a picture of how you feel. And it looks like you feel pretty bad in this one. I don't know what else to say about it. The whole thing was good, the content, flow, words used..all of it. It was a good read.
Sometimes i hate when u say i put it all on you
Sometimes i hate when u say, "its me, not you"
some times u make me somad when cuz u say ur ugly,
Those were the lines that I liked to most.
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