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Old 06-18-03, 04:07 PM   #9
Noiz
BANNED For Being A Dick
 
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Vortex Breakdown:
spilling your lines. . this fake beating me?!. . Are you for real?!
Vortex You Used Fillers In Your Verse...That's A Big Mistake, Because It's One More Line For Brick To Beat You With...You Had Some Pretty Good Punches...
i'll reload then cap him, expose this faggot for tryna flow with me
and leave him Seeing more I.V's than kids studying Roman Numeracy!
...But In The End
how much filler'd you pack in?
You Are The Only One That 'Packed' Fillers Into Your Verse...
(2 Out Of 5)

Lilbricks Breakdown:
Faggot your verse was way worse than kids battling with end fillers, this “Gay Faucker” went to “Meet the Parents” of his boyfriend as soon as he saw the movie with “Ben Stiller”

You had More Consistency of Multis, Present Of Elevation Above Vortex, And Vocabulary...Creativity Was Good Too...
(3.5 Out Of 5)

This Clearly Gos To Lilbrick...