Aight I read what yall said and got in a freestyle battle heres da link http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=58863
or if ya just wanna listen to da freestyle here that http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/rhymemastamusic.htm

it called Freestylevs. JustNice tell m what ya think and if I improved at all.

Thans for the tips yall peace