not very good. Im not hating, i only wanna see you elevate, so here:

Expand your vocab and work on your wordplay. That was a very basic rhyme, and a lot of stuff was boring or played out. For example, the boddy, shotty thing, see it all the time.

Throw in some multies, spice it up

and rap about a topic. rhymes that lead no where are very very boring to read, and are sorta annoying.

again, not hatin, jus tryin to help. good luck, keep posting, youll do fine

Peace