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Old 06-19-03, 08:01 PM   #2
emceeZ
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your flow was jumpy meaning it lost pitch and had low wordplay and small punchlines. However you had a few good lines like
"no time for kung foolery, i'm fresh like this is new to me".

My suggestion is to focus on 1 topic at a time because your flow is very wavy.
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