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I know i saw the rules 1000 posts only

but i wanna put my two cents in............im registered to poll vote but i will if u two allow it................

The Breakdown.......My way

Ripping this mime, for commiting the crime of spitting a rhyme
Because if your the man of the Hour . . im just Killing the Time.
^^....Sick..read between the lines.....8 out of 10

spilling your lines. . this fake beating me?!. . Are you for real?!
cause this kids Fucking Bananas and still has zero Sex A - Peel
^^....Slick..yeah slick punch.......7 out of 10

so now how's it feel to get shitted on with no round of applause?
id Introduce ya 2 George Lucas and u still wont have Met A Force
^^...so,so..........6 out of 10

that text of yours is pathetic, . . how much filler'd you pack in?
fuck Over Reacting. . Brick's straight Bitch and Ovary Acting!
^^....last line was good.....7 out of 10

i'll reload then cap him, expose this faggot for tryna flow with me
and leave him Seeing more I.V's than kids studying Roman Numeracy!
^^ pure originality....10 out of 10

Next Verse

Faggot your verse was way worse than kids battling with end fillers, this “Gay Faucker” went to “Meet the Parents” of his boyfriend as soon as he saw the movie with “Ben Stiller”
^^........was not feelin that at all........5 out of 10

Your verse was struggling like “starving kids” trying to stay alive, I would “feed” off your verse but instead I will make it my “job” to turn your record into another “9 to 5”(9-5)
^^.........you have to spit fast to pull this off....7 out of 10

People the Phuture is about to be forgotten like non important people in the past, the RB sponsor hooked me up with free Prime kicks so I don’t dirty my feet when shove my foot up your ass
^^....good last line bad set up though....6 out of 10

After Vortex is banned from this site him and his hand are gonna “engage” in a method called jacking, you are like soon to be “married couples” that are moving together, so you better start packing
^^.....so,so .......7 out of 10

I feel sorry for embarrassing you in front of all these people, but you challenged me to a battle, so im gonna send you “Back to the Phuture” like the Rap Battles version of the “Michael J. Fox” sequel.
^^ very loooong and bad ending...5 out of 10....

total count.......
VorteX=38

LilBrick=30

Vortex gets my vote.......i can poll vote..... tell me if u two want me too.........If not i had to let my opinion out here.....

Thank u.....