this was a dope verse. you had some good structure, the vocab was ight, and the multis defintly had you up there in rank.

what i can suggest, is get deeper within your bars..

like the shit with the roses line... it was a dope line which you could of got deeper into..and flipped some ill shit....

other than that.. you got some talent... drop open mic pieces.. and keep doint the damn thing.

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