they werent really true multis.. the sounds were too far apart..

"deamons screeming under leagues-a green steamin' sea.//"

^ that's true multis..1=multi sound 2=other sound.. 1-1-2-1-1-1.//....

yours were more like this..
i'm kicking it with a japanese flavour, you can rap with me later/
but for now just sit and listen kid, i'm basically greater/

^see how the sounds are way more spread out in yours, you went half of the second line without even using the multi sound...
2-1, 2-1.//
2-2, 1.//...

just thought I'd share that with you.. I thought it was a good piece, I liked the flow and everything.. wordplay was on, your style, and you did keep to the topic, 'cause the "multis" you were using were pretty consistant...

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