As usual you come out nicely, I peeped the audio at first, in that response I see it moreso an lyrical attmept at this piece, less spoken wordish. The wording here also draws the same conclusions. Although the piece is laiden with beatuiful imagery and emotion, the 'chorus' if you will adds another emotion to this piece, though I wish you could have added more emotion to your piece, it was good.
Quote:
As I punch my way through life were others would push or shove
And as I push my way through the obtacle called existence
I can hear the singing voice of love calling in the distance
But from my position I'm wishing that I could just see
But I'm blind and I find that love is just another enemy
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favorite lines, nice piece man.
love..