Thread: Brighter Days
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Old 06-21-03, 09:05 AM   #10
varentao
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This was quite amazing, Necro.

You see, i don't know too many people outside this 'circle' i once knew (dunt ask) that could write in such a personal way, using their dark side, yet not getting totally lost in it all. Instead, keeping a foot in what's going on/has gone on ...and exploring in that way...

I liked how it seemed to inter change from some very personal feeling as you describe your own inner pains n what not...then going on to your views of what's going on today, without loosing that personal touch...it always remained centred on yourself...and i mean that in a good way.

Then just floating effortlessly back onto more in depth and personal feelings..

..i especially like the end. How it built up with a kind of raw complexity...a great finale...

..i dunno, i got lost myself once or twice...it's hard to 'describe' such a piece...

..resp..
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