All i can say is, very well written. I mean all round. I didn't see any flaws in it. NOne that are apparent anyway.. And of course, emotions were depicted in a powerful yet controlled manner.

But please, NEVER, nominate yourself for RB Legends. Cos like when people write stuff, and they are so content and happy with it. Like they've got it all onto paper. You're going to really pumped n what not...and nominate stuff that is good, even great. But not necessarily Legends material...(something along those lines..but yeah, that's the RB reason..)...

This is the 'artistic' reason. Its the kind of feeling that shouldn't conflict with being put up in some 'hall of fame' or whatever. It should be as it is. For what it is...ya dig?




Though i guess, this is probably one that should be in there. For a certain amount of originality, and it was so well written. I'll give it a partal reccomendation.