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Old 06-22-03, 07:04 AM   #4
RythmicTendicies
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^^^for once, why don't you give some decent feedback!^^^

this piece was nice, i liked the vocab, the flow was tight. The first 2 stanza's were hott, also the bit at the end: A blind driver
Deaf songwriter
A rap artist whos a biter
A plageristic Copywriter
A judge who hates the word justice
A king who dont kno what money is
Romeo without his Juliet"


tight wordplay, good way to finsih it off....

Overall:8/10
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