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thoughts on my verse
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06-22-03, 09:17 AM
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Black.Jack
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NO FLOW AT ALL, readin that i had to stop and start alot cause it was warped structure, the ryhmes and ur vocab dont seem too bad, bein gangsta has been done too much so try and put a point to it instead of just bein one
Black.Jack