very good stuff right there....i agree with necro...very creative imagery...i loved how the way u structured it....damn! vocabs are well used ......the flow was definitely up...props for those..

hmm the only thing is that the description of the painter couldve been better represented but...its alright i liked it either way

the unique approach on the content of the whole piece definitely is gold...i loved it!

nice job....hopin to read more

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