pretty interesting....the vocabs are really good..teh flow was a bit off but could work on it....

"my heart beats to your silent drum
breathe out - so i can breathe you in - "

like they said..the whole breathing thing..is defnitely out there nice work!

ahhhhh i feel like i can relate cuz the past few days ive been feeling that shit...and its crazy...ahhh

but yeah...i liked it but couldve been better...drop more!

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