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Not Wack...But Room 4 Improvement...Flow Was Aight But Punches Werent Really There And What Was There Werent Hittin Hard Enuff...Direct Them More 2wards Understatement...They Were Just Lines Written Down And I Think I Saw One Personal...
Wordplay Aswell...Seemed A Bit Forced 2 Try 2 Impress...Just Let It Flow In The Punches...You'll Get Much Better Results...
Other Than That...Ur Verse Was Aight...Keep Workin...
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