^^U Need 2 Lengthen Ur Lines And Make Sure They Make Sense And Flow Good...Punches Need 2 Be Harder...

I Could Go On But I Think U Shud Read Xpoz'D's 101 Battling Guide...Has It All There...It Helps Alot...

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