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Old 06-24-03, 03:27 PM   #3
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these weren't my favorit lines from splitt....
"Leave your CORPSE DEPLETED WITH, spine shattered, brains lying ACROSS THE STREET AND SHIT~so just 'quit while you're a head' like 'ABORTED FETUSES'~
Just APPLAUD AND EAT A DICK, bring it to me and I'll SEVER YOUR FUCKING TEAM~left DEAD WITH A RUPTURED SPLEEN, put your HEAD WHERE YOUR NUTS SHOULD BE~
My bullets RIP THROUGH THIS KIDS VEST"
I mean it's not shitty but those were the lines I liked the least
and as for simile, these were the lines I least liked from his verse
"Split a "heavy" weight? Na! cause his chances of winnin are "slim",This kids more "wore-out" than "fake-timbs"
Split's "washed up" so juss "throw in the towel",Tryna get "ahead" of me, but I'm "grave" so I'll send you "back a vowel"
again, their good lines but I just didn't really care for them
the rest of your guy's verses were pretty good,
I read both 4 or 5 times, but in the end

vote: simile